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— Rottiestyl, Aug 15, 2007

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Region, Country: USA - Illinois, USA

Favorite Poets: Shakespeare, Emily Dickinson, Edgar Allen Poe

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

hey, I was only trying to be helpful

yeah I like pickles and one of my favourite songs is Sid Vicious's version of "I did it my way" and I never have done it anyone else's way. But I grow because I listen, even when I reject what I hear. You never did get the point of my poem "I think they don’t like me" did you? cheers, Jess
Rottiestyl

Rottiestyl

18 years 9 months ago

You know

I have had all I think I can take with all this "growing" business. Picaso, in my eyes drew really weird stuff. Personally, when I draw eyes, I put them next to each other. He had other ideas. If he followed your "grow" ideas and painted like everyone else, he would not be as famous as he is. Dead or alive. Maybe your stuck in a uniform way of thinking but in my experience (and I have had a lot in the last two years) with what editors are looking for in POETRY, not books or articles but poetry, they stress, DIFFERENT, FRESH. They are tired of the non-Picaso's. I don't follow the rules Jess, for a reason. Because I DON'T WANT TO. It's all very simple. It's got nothing to do with listening, it's all about creating. And if I don't want to check and tweak my "mechanics" I don't have to. But, the main point is, it's offered here as a CHOICE. If you wanted to question my choice, then it should have been done privately. PERIOD. Why should anyone else here follow the rules if advocates don't? I for one am not very sure I want to remain one, or a member. So, yes, I am throughly pissed off right now and in MY eyes, I have a right to be. I appreciate all your reviews Jess, but damn it, you have to let the artist do it his/her way. If it's the wrong way, I will find that out myself. So far, My published work says different. K. Mulroney
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

Kim, all of this came from me presuming on our friendship.

I am so sorry. I critted out of turn, and publicly. Again sorry. I never meant to try and change the way you write, I only , genuinely, tried to offer a suggestion that I really believed could help you write better. Clearly I was wrong. If you ever hear advice from anyone that does help you, please let me know, perhaps they could help me too. cheers, Jess
Rottiestyl

Rottiestyl

18 years 9 months ago

Friendship

is not presumed, it just IS. I told you I understood your reasoning Jess. and I do, but you should know me well enough now to realize I AM DIFFERENT. (I am going to post one more poem about. . me.) I don't normally write about my own life because it doesn't fuel me like it used to. But I am going to put it on here and maybe you will understand the way I think. This poem is called: And all I could do is. . . Breath. It has a different slang than I am sure you are used to. It is not based on the way I talk. But it is a creative approach to a real life situation. You gotta let the painter paint, Jess. You just have to, or all the art will always remain the same. It worked for Led Zepplin, it doesn't work for me. K. Mulroney