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Aug 15, 2007
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Sweet Dreams
(Sweet Dreams) 4/27/07
BY.MACHADA (AKA) VANILLA
I SEE YOU SLEEPIN' ACCROS FROM ME.
THANKIN 2 MY SELF IF SOMETHIN BETWEEN US COULD EVER BE.
SILLY COUSE IM NOT EVEN THE KIND YOUR LOOKIN FOR.
BUT THEN I RELIZE MY TYPE EQUALS OUT TO SO MUCH MORE.
OVER THIS WAY IM WONDERIN WHAT YOUR DREAMIN OF TANIGHT.
AND IT'S KINDA CRAZY BUT WHEN IM AROUND YOU IT JUST FILLS SO RIGHT.
THEN I FIND MYSELF MISSIN YOU BUT YOUR JUST RIGHT THERE.
SO FINE AND SEXY ALL I CAN DO IS STARE.
NOW MY MINDS BACK TO REALITY FROM JUST ONE SOUND THAT YOU MADE.
STILL FOUNT CHU FINE AND SEXY JUST BY THE WAY THAT CHU LAID.
ALTHOUGH MY THOUGHTS ABOUT YOU MAY BE BOGES ARE EVEN WRONG.
ESSPECIALY WHEN I HAVENT EVEN BEEN KNOWIN YOU FOR THAT LONG.
BUT STILL I FIND MYSELF UNABLE TO CONTROLL THE WAY I FILL.
IT'S ALMOST LIKE IM AT THE LIVEST PARTY AND I JUST POPPED A PILL.
AND THIS MIGHT SOUND KINDA SILLY BUT I BEEN DREAMIN 2, NOT KNOWIN ALL THIS TIME IT'S BEEN ABOUT CHU.
BUT WHATEVER IS NOT CAN ONLY BE.
SO 4 NOW I'LL ASK U THIS ONE QUESTION, WILL YOU DREAM WITH ME???
— Vanilla23, Aug 15, 2007
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Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
Gotta lose those caps, girl,
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
That said
orgami
18 years 10 months ago
kapital wanton desires
Vanilla23
18 years 10 months ago
Thanks
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