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Mirror on the wall

Get away from me!

Stop staring at me!

I can’t stand you!

You make me so mad!

Annoying me everyday!

Wasting space!

Wasting time!

Stressing me out!

Can you hear me!

Are you deaf?

Do you see me?

Falling apart!

My friend!

I hate you!

I love you!

Can you feel me when I cut into you!

 

— RandomThoughts, Aug 14, 2007

Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

Eeeek

know that kind of friendship. cheers, Jess

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