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Vitamins

Bitter taste. Drab color.

Choked when I tried to eat you.

I swear you tried to kill me.

Or maybe I was making things up?

My ear heard you were good for me.

You tightly held on to my tongue.

Slowly melting yourself all in my mouth.

Water well he wasn’t strong enough.

He couldn’t break you off.

So I swigged milk.

He kicked you down my throa

Slippery my throat became.

Nothing to hold on to.

Quickly falling into my abdomen.

Slowly dissolve ling in a pool of acid.

About to ride the ride of all rides.

Distributing your particles all through out me.

Floating thru my blood stream.

Covering me from head to toe.

Tomorrow we will wrestle again.

Hopefully I will win again.

Or maybe.

You will succeed in strangling me.

 

— RandomThoughts, Aug 14, 2007

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