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THOUGHTS

They come and they go.

Faster than speeding light.

Lost in translation.

Lost within my brain.

Forever untold.

Forgotten by the guardian

Concealed behind my teeth.

Withheld in my eyes.

Peeking from my ears.

Wanting you to know.

Wanting you to hear.

Can’t surface my thoughts.

Choked by the ribbon.

Covering my mouth.

Thoughts remain within.

Thoughts are kept safe.

Thoughts you will never know.

THOUGHTS  

— RandomThoughts, Aug 14, 2007

Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

Dig it and relate.

Except for the last line. It feels like you just didn't know how to end it. cheers, Jess

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