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ellisville

Aug 14, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

LIFE

Life’s a game, Every body can play it. When you are derail, You are off the lane. The future holds what tommorow would be . Towards the sky, Lies the hope where plants and animals mope. A mystery so esoteric. It’s such a cynic. Lets go to the mounatain floor, Praising nature for such a fall. Let the nations rise, Because our freedom is come. An incentive has it given to us, Pains caused by our wounds has it deleted. Let it rain, Let it rain on those resting in peace, And those alive. Life is beautiful.

— ellisville, Aug 14, 2007

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18 years 10 months ago

I can't comment much on this

it is too honest and lovely for an old cynic like me. A few spelling errors. Good to see you back. cheers, Jess

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ellisville

18 years 10 months ago

thanks

hey,i dont know you,i would like to know u.my email is [email protected] name is Ellis and thanks.stay cool and be blessed

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SLoEDdie

18 years 10 months ago

life is beautiful

cool poem, i really liked it!

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ellisville

18 years 9 months ago

hey

hey thanks for that and i will continue to paste nice ones and i do hope to get publish someday. ellis femi with hugs.

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