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Aug 14, 2007
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SEVENTH SENSE
Welcome to this land
to acquire the seventh sense
It is inadequate to us
to live with peace and all comforts
The narrow and croocked thoughts
have made this world as a hell
Come! and join with us for shaping this globe with love
six senses of men are went back to money so
empty rules this planet for a long time
Stand against the empty and create a new to
keep this planet with wet and cool
Weeping for other’s pains and their death and
giving life for other’s glee and grace.
Nothing will play as love in this world and
which will have to be a seventh sense of men
SAKTHIRAVICHANDRAN
— SAKTHEEE2007, Aug 14, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
the 5 common senses