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SEVENTH SENSE

Welcome to this land

to acquire the seventh sense

It is inadequate to us

to live with peace and all comforts

The narrow and croocked thoughts

have made this world as a hell

Come! and join with us for shaping this globe with love

six senses of men are went back to money  so

empty rules this planet for a long time

Stand against the empty and create a new  to

keep this planet  with wet and cool

Weeping for other’s pains and their death and

giving life for other’s glee and grace.

Nothing will play as love in this world and

which will have to be a seventh sense of  men

 

SAKTHIRAVICHANDRAN

— SAKTHEEE2007, Aug 14, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

the 5 common senses

are taste, touch, sight, hearing and smell. The sixth is often regarded as intuition or clairvoyancy (which can seldom be used for money), does that make the 7th god? cheers, Jess