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Aug 14, 2007
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Blue Heart
Family hearts glued to one
but one ripped apart
is no family at all
one that may never comeback
one the children
may never kiss again
-the one who’s busy risking life
the one America is proud of
one whose heart thumps louder
whenever looking at the impecable night sky
whose eyes fill up with tears of agony
whenever the childrens’laughter echoes in mind
-at home where they ache for the ones apperance
home, where they all belong
the smell of home they crave so much
looking at the glowing moon
wondering if home is looking too
— Nessachick, Aug 14, 2007
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Mark
18 years 10 months ago
Nessa this is really
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
no need for a message Mark,
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
I can't comment or vote.
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