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~~ Bitter Cold / Bitter Streets ~~
She had been a whore,
but not by choice.
The years of crying,
remembering all the him’s;
no one heard her voice
Bitter cold days and
bitter cold nights,
darkened alleys
junkies without sight
on another flight,
but just as bad as hers
She hated the nights
when she would end up
two miles from where
she had started.
Hating every time
her legs were parted
Her mother started her
on the streets.
Her father long gone,
body riddled with drugs.
Fresh is the memory
rats and bugs
The stale air of summer
filtered through the windows,
bringing memories of
the dilapidated rooms,
that had been home
In the winter,
the uncovered windows
allowed the rain to
splash across the room;
but it was home.
She had not forgotten
the Church’s steeple
that always beckoned,
so high in the sky,
an Omen she reckoned,
when she was out and about
Finally she ran
because the time was right,
her eyes closed tight,
she kept the memory of the
Church’s steeple
It gave her solace
on those horrible
whorish nights
She opened the door
to say “No more”.
She ran to where
no harm could reach her
Critiques
Mark
18 years 10 months ago
WOW! Lady ..
ladywriter
18 years 10 months ago
mark
Mark
18 years 10 months ago
You are very welcomed
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
I am glad you did not feel the need to preach
ladywriter
18 years 10 months ago
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