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Aug 13, 2007
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Mr. Write
Been gone too long.
Forgot about you.
Consumed by work.
Trapped by the ticking clock.
Tormented by my uniform.
Killing my dissimilarity.
Back on the production line of life.
Working to survive another night.
Working to save a life.
Left you behind.
Found a new love.
Never meant for this to happen.
We broke apart.
I will piece us back together.
We will be whole again.
We will dance on the vacant page.
Here I am.
Take me away to your world.
Let’s show them what we can do.
Spin their world make it unravel.
Twist their minds with my thoughts.
Trigger memories of you and me.
— RandomThoughts, Aug 13, 2007
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Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
8) I mostly miss my Mrs Write
IKnowNoBox
18 years 10 months ago
I'm quike to identify a muse.I get blocked easly.
barbsdad2003
18 years 10 months ago
Nicely Done
purplemoondoll
18 years 10 months ago
Really Like This
Lenny of Cohen
18 years 10 months ago
Excellent
ladywriter
18 years 10 months ago
I love this very much.