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Upsurge

Pulling stitches from your mouth. Peeling your eyes open. Turning your voice up. Provoking the wrath in you. Understanding the power you have. Use it now and forever. Knock down the comparable with your words. Break away from the production of the facsimile. Slip out of line. Scream loud for what you believe. Shout for those who can’t find their voice. See for those who are blinded. Rise up against all that hold you down. Let that voice inside guide you. Step out from the shadows you hide in. Mount. Increase. Ascend.
— RandomThoughts, Aug 13, 2007

Critiques

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HDGoodman

18 years 10 months ago

Nietzsche

and the shepard bit down on the head of the snake....you will nolonger be content to hide in the bushes like cowering fawn.... etc, etc. familiar? lovely work by the way. strong ending. love hakka dakka Goo.

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