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Will The God Answer to Me


God plays only with man
to show his power on our weaker souls
His plays are unlimited in this earth
cause many innocent souls believe him as a rescuer
May a human soul tries to be good in it’s span
In the name of tests
He will squeeze the souls to come out from it’s way
Though a man lives in a restricted circle
H e will tease in all aspects as his play
There are many supporting explanations to His acts
But none for us to save from evils and pains
Good souls never get peace in their span
only a few arrogants and devils had in the past
Cruels and sinners are blessed and
They create heaven in this earth.
Holy and pure will suffer with pains and
lost their lives in a cruel way
What for all these? and
to whom for all these?
When good will have peace and life
Will the God answer to me?

SAKTHIRAVICHANDRAN AN INDIAN ENGLISH POET

— SAKTHEEE2007, Aug 13, 2007

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purplemoondoll

18 years 10 months ago

Resonates

Really relate to this Sakkthee - well written and offers some thought provoking messages. I like the opening lines.... God plays only with man to show his power on our weaker souls His plays are unlimited in this earth cause many innocent souls believe him as a rescuer. Sets the tone and flow for the whole poem! Kaz x
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

I will answer you

there is no god or karma, all rewards and consequences are created by the laws of nature and human choices. Any other belief will destroy human integrity and the planet. cheers, Jess