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Sleepless Nights.

Sleepless nights leave me no choice but to think,

I think about life,

I think about all the bad things that has happened to me,

Sleepless nights leave me no choice but to cry,

I dont know why,

Sleepless nights leave me no choice but to hurt,

Smiling wont work,

Sleepless nights leaves me no choice but to miss you,

And want to kiss you,

But it seems like I will never get a chance to do that,

Why is that?

I thought we were happy together,

Never mind dont answer that!

I just want to go to sleep without you dancing through like a annoying song,

Goodnight!

 

 

— dat_shady_chick_2007, Aug 13, 2007

Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

oh yes, I have felt the same so often

and I am an old white man. That is true poetry, when your words are universal. the line "I just want to go to sleep without you dancing through like a annoying song," is great. thank you shady. cheers, Jess

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