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Aug 12, 2007
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True Awakening
The moon had bid us goodnight,
daylight found us sound asleep,
holding tight to one another;
our bodies were tangled as one
I woke, I heard you snore,
so quietly, I touched you.
Your body became alive
for me to explore
Yes, we have the time, until…
The moon would bid us goodnight
once more
— ladywriter, Aug 12, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
So quietely and deeply sensual
ladywriter
18 years 10 months ago
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