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Nonexsistence

Love is fictional,

It has no reality to it at all,

It is a made up strategy,

It is a feeling that will drive you crazy,

The pain is deep and will follow you with every thought,

Don’t loose you path and try and find love it’s not worth it,

Love will leave you empty and filled with sorrow,

Giving up on love wont be hard after you see the real outcome,

I believe in lust, feelings, and just caring for someone but not love,

It’s nonexsistence!

 

— dat_shady_chick_2007, Aug 12, 2007

Critiques

Mark

Mark

18 years 10 months ago

Ohh Lady Chick . . .

If not for love we would all be distorted or dead. BUT I know you are talking about "being in love" or "falling in love" that given, it is pretty strong poetry a real expresion of your belief and well done.
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

I feel the pain you are writing from

I believe lust, feelings, and just caring for someone is love, if it is returned. And it is not just ladies who feel this. Beautifully spoken. cheers, Jess

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