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Aug 12, 2007
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To jazz outside newtown cinema
The speakers of of the old cinemas defined my childhood.
Define who I am today,
and for what?
Early Hollywood profit.
A place where the women are
Diamonds; bought, sold and cut.
Where dirty men are kings.
Where (dispite popular belief)
we live alone in our shells
That echo only
our own voices
which are everything;
but are worth nothing.
only our qwn reverberated voices keep us sane
and the blood-meat pump
grinds away at the clock
like racists at a coalface
who make jokes about being black.
— HDGoodman, Aug 12, 2007
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purplemoondoll
18 years 10 months ago
Nice Work!
HDGoodman
18 years 10 months ago
Cheers from the noonday sun!
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
you are a hellava good poet, Harry
IKnowNoBox
18 years 9 months ago
Never been there,
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