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sleepwalker

this is the winding castle
of wet brick
crying sirens,
late sleepers in empty
rooms. teasing curtains
part in dim lamp light,
illuminating fast sneakers
with their starched ruffles.
to find the lord for these
grounds, you think,
would mean howling miles
and screeching
tires, ducking the neon lit
arms that swing in a
clumsy brail of the damned,
silky echoes of wet wind
markered with twilight’s
frigid grin. and you are right–
but near chipped gutters,
between torn fences,
you may find him at last
resting in his muddy tower,
open palmed and
somehow lost
asking for his key

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barbsdad2003

18 years 8 months ago

Nicely Twisted

I especially like twilight's frigid grin. At the opposite end of today's twilight, this morning's opening was cool and thickly---mysteriously---fog-shrouded. I startled young bunny, who galloped in silence ahead of me on my quiet weed-gathering harvest rounds for breakfast. Thanx, Chuck
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

something surged within me as I read this

a kind of excitement and fear, rising to "and you are right–" then a sinking grim-ness set in. I shiver. An extraordinarily emotionally evocative work. And I can not explain it nor want to try. Perfect poetry. cheers, Jess
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Quillsvein1

18 years 8 months ago

Your

reactions to my poems are almost exactly correct all the time. eerily sentient of my motives. as i say, the city made me and in some ways made my poetry but often i feel it to be a scary, lost place with a weird sense of crowded salvation as reflected in this poem. thank you!
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Conect11

18 years 8 months ago

beatifully done

I felt the thump thump thump of the beat in this poem. As always you bring this together in surreal cohesion. Not many guys can write poetry I find sexy, and this even sounds f*cking weird but that's some sexy poetry! Mark
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

by the way

did "brail" meen a sailing term or did you mean braille, for blind people? cheers, Jess
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Quillsvein1

18 years 8 months ago

You

got me, and it's a good thing you did. i indeed meant "braille". i'm indebted to you: i was about to send this poem to a magazine--not a huge magazine mind you, us mortals without huge academic credentials/connections aren't allowed to do that and get accepted--thank you!
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 2 months ago

sleepwalker

All of the above and you have yet to go back and correct "braille." Sorry if I find that slightly amusing. How did it go with the publisher, I wonder? This has nothing to do with the poem. I should mention, however, that it is a great pleasure to spend this dreary afternoon perusing your work at my leisure. ~ Ronda