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Aug 10, 2007
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Visions of Afterlife
spoke your last words
released your final breath
captured the last scene
your heart halts at final stop
-steps into black
soars into white
vast land of beauty
strums a chord at heart
your eyes that had never laid
upon such awe
water with eternal peace
-blood stops frozen
coldness redeems your body
dark gray spreads throughtout
your soft porcelein skin
-the staircase to heaven
faces your spirit
memories of love
pain
and mistakes
flash by deep in mind
as your steps get closer
into the light ahead
look up to see loved ones
smiling upon you
together tears run slowly
as harmony takes over the moment
forever more
— Nessachick, Aug 10, 2007
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Mark
18 years 10 months ago
Nessa, beginning and end
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
this is quite extraordinary
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