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Aug 10, 2007
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Chasing Rainbows
Our tale’s unwritten, missed potential
Greets the dawn and fades away
A contradiction caught in silence
‘Will they, wont they?’ - let it play.
We kiss the stars and felt them tremble
Touching twilight, let it dance
So many games now lost in stalemate
‘Will they, won't they?’ – just a chance.
Trust and friendship, mixed with laughter
Soul mates now and ever more
As for passion, well I wonder
‘Will they won’t they?’ - are you sure?
Chasing rainbows, false perception
Mar the journey on to bliss.
We are too wrapped in imperfection
‘Will they, wont they?’ – did we miss?
Trouble is we’ve been and done it
Oh so many times before.
I could love you, then it falters
Will they won’t they?' – where's the door?
So here’s the challenge, if you’ll take it
Grab a pen and let it scrawl.
I'm sick of chasing shattered rainbows
‘Will they, won't they?' - it's your call.
Greets the dawn and fades away
A contradiction caught in silence
‘Will they, wont they?’ - let it play.
We kiss the stars and felt them tremble
Touching twilight, let it dance
So many games now lost in stalemate
‘Will they, won't they?’ – just a chance.
Trust and friendship, mixed with laughter
Soul mates now and ever more
As for passion, well I wonder
‘Will they won’t they?’ - are you sure?
Chasing rainbows, false perception
Mar the journey on to bliss.
We are too wrapped in imperfection
‘Will they, wont they?’ – did we miss?
Trouble is we’ve been and done it
Oh so many times before.
I could love you, then it falters
Will they won’t they?' – where's the door?
So here’s the challenge, if you’ll take it
Grab a pen and let it scrawl.
I'm sick of chasing shattered rainbows
‘Will they, won't they?' - it's your call.
— purplemoondoll, Aug 10, 2007
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Critiques
Mark
18 years 10 months ago
I drove under a rainbow today
SLoEDdie
18 years 10 months ago
i love question poetry
Mark
18 years 10 months ago
Second time
SAKTHEEE2007
18 years 10 months ago
Exellent wordings and enjoyable peace
Rapsalot
18 years 7 months ago
Soul mate dairy
IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
Will they,Wont they?
barbsdad2003
18 years ago
My answer?
purplemoondoll
18 years ago
lol thanks Chuck! Spot on -
RSScheerer
18 years ago
Kaz
Janice Pearce
18 years ago
Kaz
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