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INA FIRDAY AFTERNOON
AN INCIDENT IN ONE FRIDAY AFTERNOON HAS BEEN DESCRIPTED
IN A FRIDAY AFTERNOON
IN A FRIDAY AFTERNOON
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I was on roads on duty then
the time might be two or three afternoon
It was too hot to stand on roads, there
I recieved a message from my home.
I forgot every thing and road too and
my legs were in a hurry to rush
I forgot my duty and traffic too
My legs reached my home and lost my sense
to remove my shoes at the doorsteps
I found a crowd in my bed room
creating a jovial atmosphere
i had lost my patience and with a shout
I entered and had a vision of my little Angel
Which was near with a little rosy lips
In a sweet melting voice
I t declared it’s arrival to me and to this world
Though she is now at eleven
I t is green in my memory and it will be for ever.
SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN AN INDIAN ENGLISH POET
Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
Sakthi, you are one hell of a poet.
SAKTHEEE2007
18 years 10 months ago
Thank you Jess
barbsdad2003
18 years 10 months ago
Ravee:
SAKTHEEE2007
18 years 10 months ago
Thank you grandpa