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INA FIRDAY AFTERNOON

AN INCIDENT IN ONE FRIDAY AFTERNOON HAS BEEN DESCRIPTED

IN A FRIDAY AFTERNOON

IN A FRIDAY AFTERNOON
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I was on roads on duty then
the time might be two or three afternoon
It was too hot to stand on roads, there
I recieved a message from my home.
I forgot every thing and road too and
my legs were in a hurry to rush
I forgot my duty and traffic too
My legs reached my home and lost my sense
to remove my shoes at the doorsteps
I found a crowd in my bed room
creating a jovial atmosphere
i had lost my patience and with a shout
I entered and had a vision of my little Angel
Which was near with a little rosy lips
In a sweet melting voice
I t declared it’s arrival to me and to this world
Though she is now at eleven
I t is green in my memory and it will be for ever.

SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN AN INDIAN ENGLISH POET

— SAKTHEEE2007, Aug 10, 2007

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barbsdad2003

18 years 10 months ago

Ravee:

I see humor, clarity, wonder, and how your/my mind so holds close those experiences you/I hold dear. With much appreciation and Thanx again, Grandpa PS: Wouldn't it be great if your/my babe could have had the experience of welcoming you/me into this world at your/my first entry! I suggest such just to make the circle complete.