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HDGoodman
Aug 08, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

SOFTCORE

I’m softcore,
I sing in the shower with the waterdrops
Hitting the floor.
I’m softcore,
I only drink booze under 20%
Nothing more!
I’m softcore
I don’t follow religion,
But vegetarianism my law.
I’m softcore,
I won’t watch films with
Blood guts or gore.
I’m softcore,
I read alot
But try not to be a bore.
I’m softcore,
I write sensitive poetry
behind my closed door.
I’m softcore,
I play acoustic guitar
because distortion makes my brain sore.

— HDGoodman, Aug 08, 2007
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charlieweinberg

18 years 10 months ago

Softcore

hahahah, excellent. Love it, thank you! Love the comedy, wordplay and surprises. You take risks and don't seem afraid of not being able to follow whatever comes along...I really like this piece.
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el_rochy

18 years 10 months ago

ssg

sweet sentiment man dig the irony sweet in its softcore glory
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purplemoondoll

18 years 10 months ago

Excellent flow and Imagery

I love this - it flows like a song and reads like a dream. Made me chuckle....lol and I totally relate to it! Brilliant language use - excellent gift! Kaz x

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