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poet_inside
Aug 07, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Games

 

You played with my head

You played with my heart

It simply tore me apart

Somehow you made me feel whole

You blinded my soul

You told lies

I believed were true

Now I’m through

No longer do I wish to be with you

No more games

No more pain

For this I have myself to blame

Now I live in bliss

For, you I do not miss

I called heads

You called tails

Game over

— poet_inside, Aug 07, 2007
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onisd23

18 years 10 months ago

nice

I hear u I feel your pain sometimes we just have to say gameover.
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purplemoondoll

18 years 10 months ago

Resonates

yep like this! And the message behind it! Well written
Mark

Mark

18 years 10 months ago

Boom Done !!

just hate it when a relationship becomes the work of games - like there is not enough reality to deal with who needs a lot of that waste or any really. I like the end most of all here boom done ! lol - nice
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poet_inside

18 years 10 months ago

Thanks. When I first wrote

Thanks. When I first wrote it I had a longer ending, then when I decided to type it and then read it I took some parts out.. Wasn't sure if it would work or not. Thanks again. Brittany Rae

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