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DEATH OF LOVE

 DEATH OF LOVE
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For the past one month,
There is no sun rise in my world
For the past one week,
There is no breathing in my heart
Why all these and what for?
Cause she told me to
marry another girl in my life
What wrong with me? and
Why she told me in such a way?
Cause she is not belonging my caste
Yes. She is from a down trodden community
Whats wrong in it?
The olden,rotten creatures told
it is crime against Him and rituals.
Both we got married with ever paining hearts
But she dead at a sudden cause
her guilt has killed her peace and life
Oh! THE ROTTEN OLD PIGS
Not to cross on the life of lovers.

SAKTHI RAVICHANRAN

— SAKTHEEE2007, Aug 07, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

I was truly moved to tears, Sakthi

This is so desperately, passionately sad and angry I felt it was happening to me. I think, perhaps, the best of your works I have read. Brilliant and brave, I salute you, fine poet! cheers, Jess
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SAKTHEEE2007

18 years 10 months ago

THANKS

DEAR JESS I AM REALLY FORTUNATE TO HAVE YOUR FRIENDSHIP AND NICE COMMENTS TO READ GIVE ME TIPS TO MOVE TO THE SKY AND REACH THE PEAK OF FAME THANKS A LOT SAKTHEE
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

You clearly don't need many tips

and I don't know if you appreciate them, you still write in caps and you have not responded to my comments about the story on giving blood. Is fame really important? I will always be content with the appreciation of my peers and strangers. Andy Warhol taught us all we need to know about fame. cheers, Jess
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SAKTHEEE2007

18 years 10 months ago

sorry Jess

Sorry Jess i cant think that my mail in caps will hurt you in such level. sorry to you. Some times by mistake of fingers this type of errors happened . Really I need your fiendship and advises I will here after follow your remarks Keep cool and be happy with me Sakthee
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

Hey, it's ok Sakthee

No big deal, just stirring you up a bit. Australian mates often tease, even insult each other, to us it is a sign of strong friendship when we can do that. Americans too, you should hear some of the dreadful names that bugger Mark, conect11, calls me! cheers, Jess
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Conect11

18 years 9 months ago

masterfully done

if only you knew how deeply your emotion gets painted through in your poems. The best work to me is the kind that I can relate to, that I can feel. And you have that here. Mark