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Siren Song

Sirens Song

 

You sang your song so beautifully like an angel from heavens choir,

That sound was so soft and glorious and pure and it set our souls’ on fire;

But then you lured him away from me with that song that I loved so much,

Yes you robbed me of my one true love with your song and your sirens touch;

And even though my love for him was pure and also true,

The beauty of your sirens song made me give him up to you;

Oh mystical siren oh marvelous siren grace me with you song,

So that I can rest and cry no more for the love that has long gone;

                                                                  LIA

— LIA, Aug 06, 2007

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18 years 10 months ago

Very well put, it flowed

Very well put, it flowed across the page nicely. Brittany Rae

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