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Aug 05, 2007
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Drive, Will & Choice.
I’m in love with two people.
I’m in love with no people,
I’m in love with myself
And heroin made him thin
And ice made her look sixty-five
And we love the night,
We love the night.
The Dichotomy:
To punch our life like a wholesome cigarette,
Or stay,
stay state of mind
still as,
still as.
But like;
Soft last shake of an abandoned
Bird’s nest,
As the littlest one takes flight,
And the soft bowl
of twigs and down
is left.
Sweet and dormant.
Pictures left over
Laywhispering in my skull:
Little ghosts rocking.
— HDGoodman, Aug 05, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
Bloody hell HD,
muttering_madwoman
18 years 2 months ago
Drive, will, choice, and is
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