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Aug 03, 2007
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Theatre
Those old plays!
With intriguing middle agers
In make up,
And dress ups!:
Like serious children.
The dusty musty
Solid, fake velvet curtains
And used floorboards
Withered, creaked and strong
That held many thoughts
Lived out
On its old back
* * *
its all ways there the old theatre cavern.
The cave.
Go down deep.
It’s cool;
In it’s silence.
I find it hard to imagine it with it’s party,
Host face on.
Now that I’ve visited it
When it was quiet
And lonesome
Like a grandpa.
* * *
the rich women,
with their shawls,
are far from here now,
no-longer linger
their shadows.
No trace.
— HDGoodman, Aug 03, 2007
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Conect11
18 years 10 months ago
rich
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
like Mark said.
HDGoodman
18 years 10 months ago
guys
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
slamming is americanese
el_rochy
18 years 10 months ago
slamming
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