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LC
Lenny of Cohen
Aug 03, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I Am

I am
in his hand
I am his
constant companion
I am his aid
I am a part
of his art

he writes
in stanzas
to mould and shape
to give form

and to
allow his reader
to digest
what has been read

a brief reflection
a contemplation
of the images
thrown into
the readers mind

(c) 3.8.2007 Lenny Gazbowski

 

— Lenny of Cohen, Aug 03, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

I like this

but am having a "thick" attack. Who is "he"? Oh, he is the stanza, got it. Well put and needed to be said. I have seen a lot of poems that could soar to another level with just the addition of some apt stanza breaks. (we won't even think about line breaks, eh, 8) cheers, Jess
C

Conect11

18 years 10 months ago

you stole

my title, dipstick! lol! (course, I stole it from the Bible) Mark
LC

Lenny of Cohen

18 years 4 months ago

Gentlemen

I am honoured to receive your kind comments. My time at Neopoets is far from enough, due to my ongoing health worries (which I laugh at - unfortunately the swines laugh back, and LOUDER !!!). I will be back when my brain is not drunk on morphine, HIC ! Poetry is my deep friend who never leaves my side, as is the case with you two fine poets. Love,Light and above all Laughter, Lenny x