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Aug 02, 2007
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Crescent Waltz
She slants her shining, golden glance
Across desert, mountains, rivers, plants
Greets her rising, true romance
In the purpling, opposite skies
Her lunar love, her heart’s delight
Soars to ever darker height
For each, the other’s perfect, right
It’s on their wings time flies
She seems asleep within the night
Yet always, somewhere, she’s brilliant, bright
Motionless in constant flight
Each day its own surprise
They’ll never meet – there’s not a chance
These partners in eternal dance
Of darkness, light – they both enhance
The world with their long goodbyes
As their crescent waltz achieves crescendo
Without artifice or innuendo
Young children start to play Nintendo
While adults stir and rise
— waterdragon, Aug 02, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
A bloody near perfect poem
waterdragon
18 years 4 months ago
I'm so glad Andrew bombarded us!
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