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Aug 02, 2007
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Startled Grasshoppers
A floral blanket of silence
Lies out across the desert
Nothing moves-not air
Nor trees
Nor blades of grass
The ogre’s breath is held
Suspended, then expelled
Stomping his feet,
Flashing his eyes,
Grumbling, the ogre
Blows
And, grumbling, cries
Fat sheeted tears –
Trees quickly bow
Shaken green heads as
The silent blanket erupts
In oceanic waves
Of startled grasshopper minions
— waterdragon, Aug 02, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
I wonder if this is one of your earlier works
waterdragon
18 years 4 months ago
Naive voice
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