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The Creation of Dog and Cat

Adam said to God, one day

"I need a reminder of your love."

And then, God said, "No problem."

And he sent dog down from above.

Dog’s love and adoration

he gave Adam without fail,

dog loved Adam in spite of himself

dog was happy, and wagged his tail.

Then an angel came to God, and said

"That’s too much to be allowed…

..for Adam basks in adoration,

and he’s becoming much too proud!"

Then God said, "I’ll send Adam a cat,

an animal that won’t obey.

He’ll teach Adam that he’s not supreme

and teach him humility throughout the day."

Well, God was pleased that Adam improved

the cat was the balance needed there,

Adam’s life went on, and dog wagged his tail,

and cat absolutely didn’t care!

— docmaverick, Aug 02, 2007

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

tres cool

wonder why I can't stand dogs? they always seem obsequious and sycophantic to me. cheers, Jess
JB

Jillian Botha

18 years 9 months ago

A lovely take on the difference between Dog and Cat

Hi Doc Maverick This was a very cute write i loved this one!!! the difference between Dog and Cat is clearly outlined here!! One of the reasons i have to say i am a Cat person all the way!!! Thanks for this Kind regards Feebie Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)