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conformity
Fire is heating the core of all lost consciousnesses.
Destiny is drowning all dreams and unspoken truths alive within.
This desire is an overwhelming intense emotion that clouds all logic
The numbness was just a temporary illusion of pain.
Cover all feeling and creativity with this timid heat.
Blanket this fate with fallacious passion.
Isolate these lies and ignorant opinions to melt away in the rain.
crippling the ethereal side of lost creation
One single man spawned from god.
Metamorphosize yourself into this surreal being.
Cowardly accept this slow burn of belief.
hyperbolize the obvious fraud.
Allow the blistering comfort to overcome your soul too.
question all results.
wait endlessly for answers that will never emerge.
The calling of confusion transformed by beauty and the enlightened few.
Float away from god to find the world that sits below your wrist.
swim towards the light, and fall into the crevases of all that are damned to conformity.
these sad hearts attempting to reach happiness through stereotypes and failed attempts to properly inquire.
Fulfill yourself with wisdom and lovely pessimism.
For these isolated to one belief, breathed through water and failed to succumb to the fire.
Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
I think you commented elsewhere
Conect11
18 years 10 months ago
my wife
anonymitylll
18 years 10 months ago
i would just like to say
Conect11
18 years 10 months ago
your reply
anonymitylll
18 years 10 months ago
i shift no blame.. its just
Conect11
18 years 10 months ago
God bless you
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