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O

of all the pleasure candy

 

 

Pernod on her breath and thick Clinique

citrus and alcohol

players unfiltered tilted in her slender fingers

 

my tie is correct

this dark suit is pressed

one diamond glitters on a silver stud

 

we grin our wolfish grins and drink

our tonics

swept up in the beat of music

the techo eighties

crimped hair

 

midnight and we’re still there

swaying and inebriated

the sweating masses

the shiny faces of

revellers

 

our masks delight us

as we play

 

toast to morning

here at last

this frosted cup of Pernod

 

dew burning off the neglected back lawn

 

…O…

— orgami, Aug 02, 2007

Critiques

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purplemoondoll

18 years 10 months ago

Amazing Imagery

Pernod on her breath and thick Clinique citrus and alcohol players unfiltered tilted in her slender fingers I absolutley love this it conjures a very vivid picture - I can see and smell her so clearly. More More!!!! Kaz x

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