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Two As One

Colours of our love
Ultra-violet-infra-red
And all else between.

Everywhere I go
The touch of your fingertips
Trickling down my spine.

You captured my heart
With kisses made of honey
Phenomenal bee.

Honey sweetens life
I knew that it would be so
The day I met you.

Imagination
Flying on the wings of love
You make me feel good.

Like ducks to water,
Our souls have melded as one
You and I, all time.

Music to my ears
Are conversations with you
Although we don’t talk.

Share your time with me
And I will multiply it
By eternity.

Shelter from the sun
Run away from all that heat
Stay within my hug.

Silk-stranded cobwebs
Catch our love and hold our dreams
Embroidering time.

Strength needs a soft heart
Toughness needs a warm soul too
Platinum and silk.

Suddenly you came
Rainbow arc across my sky
Technicolour gem.

Two hearts beat as one
A portrait of the future
The mirror of love

When I am with you
Forever’s not just a word
But the here and now.

You entered my life
Suffused it with inner glow
And taught me to love.

Your words are awesome
Emotive undercurrent
Refracting your love.

— tanja, Aug 01, 2007

Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

Wow! a really impressive love poem

adore the continuing imagery about the nature of light and colour. The poems sparkles colourfully. One line descends to cliche "Two hearts beat as one" well maybe a few others, but that is so hard to avoid in a love poem. cheers, Jess
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barbsdad2003

18 years 10 months ago

Nice!

Here lies an impressive command of English ... and proper punctuation! An open pleasure And hidden treasure. Thanx, Chuck
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ROLCAM

18 years 10 months ago

Very Impressive !!

The mastery of the English Language mirrors throughout. Very, very colourful. I wish the bee visits me before I am put to rest. roland camilleri sydney australia.
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purplemoondoll

18 years 10 months ago

Wow!

This has a wonderful lyrical flow and it really resonated with me! Well written! I love this part.. Your words are awesome Emotive undercurrent Refracting your love. And as it says - your words are awesome! Kaz x
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Josephine

18 years 4 months ago

Tanja's "Two As One"

Beautiful! It fully illustrates that love brings fulfilment to life!

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