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Two As One
Colours of our love
Ultra-violet-infra-red
And all else between.
Everywhere I go
The touch of your fingertips
Trickling down my spine.
You captured my heart
With kisses made of honey
Phenomenal bee.
Honey sweetens life
I knew that it would be so
The day I met you.
Imagination
Flying on the wings of love
You make me feel good.
Like ducks to water,
Our souls have melded as one
You and I, all time.
Music to my ears
Are conversations with you
Although we don’t talk.
Share your time with me
And I will multiply it
By eternity.
Shelter from the sun
Run away from all that heat
Stay within my hug.
Silk-stranded cobwebs
Catch our love and hold our dreams
Embroidering time.
Strength needs a soft heart
Toughness needs a warm soul too
Platinum and silk.
Suddenly you came
Rainbow arc across my sky
Technicolour gem.
Two hearts beat as one
A portrait of the future
The mirror of love
When I am with you
Forever’s not just a word
But the here and now.
You entered my life
Suffused it with inner glow
And taught me to love.
Your words are awesome
Emotive undercurrent
Refracting your love.
Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
Wow! a really impressive love poem
barbsdad2003
18 years 10 months ago
Nice!
ROLCAM
18 years 10 months ago
Very Impressive !!
purplemoondoll
18 years 10 months ago
Wow!
Josephine
18 years 4 months ago
Tanja's "Two As One"
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