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Jul 31, 2007
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We Loved Him So (for brother Ron)
A flame still burning deep inside why did you have to go?
We never thought it would be true, oh how we loved him so.
Why did you have to leave us, why did you have to go!
We asked the Lord to answer because we loved him so.
A cloudy day it truley was, the day we all stood round, then
suddenly the clouds did part and a sunbeam touched the ground.
And as we looked up at the sky, we saw by heaven’s grace, nestled
in the scattered clouds, there shown our mother’s face.
The Lord had truly answered, our healing can begin.
We’ll cling to one another, tell we gather round again.
Judith
— Judith, Jul 31, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
I sorry for your loss
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