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Jul 30, 2007
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SHOW MY PATH
SHOW MY PATH
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Iam totally confused and with tears
cause there is a call from the old hell and
the threat from my new heaven
Where i will have to go? to remain in heaven
or to go to the old and nasty hell
I t is a question screwing my mind.
Though iam solid and strong in state
My mind wavers and keeps me in fear
Though the Lord is so kind enough to me
The order from the hell to strong er than His love
With full of frestations ,I decided to go to hell
to avoid all confussions and worries
Is it correct? show my path . Dear!
SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN AN INDIAN ENGLISH POET
— SAKTHEEE2007, Jul 30, 2007
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barbsdad2003
18 years 10 months ago
Ravi:
SAKTHEEE2007
18 years 10 months ago
ANY THING WRONG IN THIS POEM
barbsdad2003
18 years 10 months ago
Ravi: