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A Realistic Illusion

Sometimes deep in the shadows of my mind

I see a world where the sun has never shined

Where colors combine together to create …

A Realistic Illusion.

When night becomes darker

And I see the colors of many

And shadows of plenty

And with the mind

I see colors combine together to create…

A Realistic Illusion.

 By: Dominique Jorgensen

 

— amysticmoondance, Jul 29, 2007

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