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Jul 29, 2007
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A Realistic Illusion
Sometimes deep in the shadows of my mind
I see a world where the sun has never shined
Where colors combine together to create …
A Realistic Illusion.
When night becomes darker
And I see the colors of many
And shadows of plenty
And with the mind
I see colors combine together to create…
A Realistic Illusion.
By: Dominique Jorgensen
— amysticmoondance, Jul 29, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
this works well
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