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hallucination
the tea was warm and delicious on the tongue
"let me play an album" she said on a spontaneous
moment in mid speech
the lights were low and there was a single large vanilla
candle burning on the mantle
the needle dropped
the hiss began clicking with dust
Bryan Ferry’s "Avalon" begun to play
my truck was framed by the streetlight
outside
"So do you like it?" she asked hesitantly
"Yes..I used to own this album in fact.. its one of my
favourites!" in this i was not lying
she sat down and in doing so our legs rubbed up
against one another in fact her right foot was
touching my lower leg
(i didnt move away)
"what time was your meeting supposed to be over??" she
asked quizzically
i breathed deeply exhaled and told her
"so..shes not expecting you right away then…"
birds were just starting to chirp in the thick blackness
of morning when i shifted into reverse and backed
out on the street
nineteen miles to go
..O..
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
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