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Jul 29, 2007
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Hold the knife straight
she idles down and stops
drifts slowly
speedometer "O"
"Goddammit"
she slips behind the wheel
while i dip under the car
unfolding my stainless knife
"Okay!" I yell
as i connect the two points across
the starter
Sparks fly as the metal arcs and burns
oldsmobile running smooth as a kitten
i climb in toss the knife on the floor
its got great chunks from the blade
wont shut now
we are off though
i punch the cassette in and Hank Williams
starts to moan about a "Singing Waterfalls"
night supreme flows past
three quarters of a tank of gas
sequential-six fuel inject
smooth as sex
we rocket through the night
stainless steel
and hearts full of hope
..O..
— orgami, Jul 29, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
Kerouac would be proud.
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