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doppelganger

when the streets grow pale and crisp
with icy snaps of frosted moonlight
he may emerge, coloring
every chilled breath taken by
the solitary citygoer. a costumed
deja vu, he issues dim calls to
remembrance in the slinking itches
shadows plant far back in the smoke
machine of memory. a buckled succubus,
drawing drowsily on sleepy hesitation
he studs our lazy dreams with silver
foxes, moving quickly through to our
waking moments. growing stronger, he
bleeds inky halos over the slim lines
written in apathetic glee. you may
even find him over the shadow of
the pen, whispering heavy shades
tracing angry contours over the
scratching rhythm of every line.

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

stylistically very clever,

love the way you manage the line breaks. It gives it a certain urgent pace. I also wonder if you are taking the piss out of deep poetry. The imagery is so dense as to be almost obscure. Then again it is 7am on a saturday morning and I haven't slept yet. cheers, Jess
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Quillsvein1

18 years 9 months ago

thanks

jess. your frankness is becoming your trademark in my book. as for the imagery being obscure, here i have to agree with that studious old decadent mallarme: "of course I am obscure, if one expects to open a newspaper". sleep tight.
C

Conect11

18 years 9 months ago

man I

so needed this poem! Perhaps if my mood was different I would see this differently, but as it were this raw, visceral work bites right through me. There is excellence here, and I'm loving it. Mark
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

don't you just love poetry?

look at how wildly diverse mine and Marks comments are, neither completely off the mark, although mine was furthest. 8) cheers, Jess
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 2 months ago

doppelganger

There are certain words that must be called favorites, and your title here happens to be one of mine. I love both the sound of the word and its definition. Your poetry speaks to readers on so many different levels, each another layer to peel away and discover more about themselves than they may have expected. I happen to be partial to enigmatic and perplexing poetry. Perhaps this is why your work sweeps me up in a tide of empathy. ~ Ronda