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Jul 28, 2007
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Obsession with u and all that surrounds you.
Seeing you every day would lead to self distruction.
You was never what I expected you to be.
You was less that what I desired.
I wanted more than what was there.
I wanted to make you feel all that you dont have.
You dont belong here with me.
Yet you stand your ground never to be moved.
Wondering why I'm here and where your at.
Stalking you like the shadows of the dark.
Sticking my finger in your eye just to make you cry.
Bite your lip til it bleeds.
I wanna take from you what you toke from me.
Diging my teeth into your shoulder.
Scratching into you back.
Leaving marks of me in you.
— RandomThoughts, Jul 28, 2007
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