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Jul 28, 2007
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SOAP
Looking so simple.
Smelling ever so lovely.
Spent much time together.
Burned my eyes when we got to close.
Everyday and always we are together.
Our love has turned into an obsession.
Can’t seem to leave you.
Smooth is your touch.
You taste of bitterness.
Ever so pale.
Pushed me down in the shower.
I forgave you.
It’s not your fault you’re so slippery.
Cover me like a blanket.
Passionate your scent became.
You made everything go away.
Left me and purity holding hands.
Washing you away now.
Tomorrow we will see each other again.
— RandomThoughts, Jul 28, 2007
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weirdelf
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