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Corporate America

Corporations drinking blood like wine. Sacrificing their families for money. Infecting the minds of the young and hopeless. Murdering the hearts of the innocent. Creator of the carbon copy. Telling you you’re not pretty. Telling you you’re not good enough. Programming the minds of the youthful. Decaying what is real. Renewing the false and pretend. Pretending to understand. Covering up all the lies. Slaughtering those who challenge corporate America. Animosity growing out of control. Hate taking over those who defy. Cleverness binding himself thru out our bodies. Violence compressed between our hearts and minds. Gonna take back what belongs to us. Putting our lives upon it. Taking back control. Dominating corporate America. Knocking them down with the golden mallet. Capture what is yours. Rob them of their reality. Steal their thoughts. Push your way thru. They left you with no choice. No repentance for what you’ve done. Rise up those who have fallen beneath corporate America. Perfection will make them new. Rise to your feet. Below lies the dead corpse of corporate America.

— RandomThoughts, Jul 27, 2007

Critiques

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Conect11

18 years 11 months ago

good

in your stream of conciousness form, but lacking in originality. I think at some point or another most American poets have penned this piece. I suppose that complaining about corporate America is alot like writing about love. Lots of people do it, and not very many do it especially well. A good attempt with the rallying cry, reads a bit like "rage Against the Machine." Mark W.
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RandomThoughts

18 years 11 months ago

You true on that

True I didn't care for it that much either. But I put it on here anyways.

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