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Hope

Thought the doctor says

but i don’t know if u know

that i am more than they.

Thought u won’t

but it’s gone.

Check it, it’s no more.

— ellisville, Jul 27, 2007

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first time I think I can say I need some context and explanation before I review this poem. Mark W.

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