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Jul 27, 2007
Tears in heaven
I have a hope to carry on,
even if tommorow stop.
The storm has come;
i did won
but that was just before my fall.
My hope has come short.
I wish i could dress my hut.
I am in jail,
my tears wears
but don’t tell it to them.
My destiny i thought i could embrace;
even where i from i thought i could chased again,
but don’t cry for me;
i have already cried it.
The death sentence is real.
Nothing have i done to deserve this.
My grave have i been shown,
it’s more than six feet;
but my eyes still won’t believe it.
— ellisville, Jul 27, 2007
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