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Me and Mr. Paragraph

Dear, Mr. Paragraph

How are you today Mr. Paragraph? I’m doing fine if you might ask. Today I got another comment on our writings. Why do they hate the love we have for each other? Can they not understand the love between us? They can’t understand you unless I change you. Wanting me to replace you with Stanzas. Why? I don’t know. You and I Mr. Paragraph belong together. We fit together like a thousand piece puzzle. I don’t need Stanza I need you. Forever in my mind. They can’t accept you and me. Why read then? I tell them everyday I won’t change you. Seems that they can’t hear me. Should I scream louder? Should I wear a sign? What do I do to make them understand? Why comment on you if they can’t understand us? Mr. Paragraph I love and respect you. Emotion says hi. She said she will see you soon. When I get off work maybe we can get together and have a sit down. One day maybe they will give us a chance. One day they will understand us. Until then I will keep writing you.

 

                                                                You’re Love,

                                                                 Jennifer

— RandomThoughts, Jul 27, 2007

Critiques

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RandomThoughts

18 years 11 months ago

Dont ask then

I don't write for you or anyone I write for me. If you get something from my writings then thats awesome if not then it really don't matter. Im not here to conform to your ways of a writer. I have my own way of putting thoughts out there in the world. If you do not like then move along and don't comment.
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

if you don't post

Real poets care about how they are recieved.... You are very fucking good. But do you think you are so good that you are completely alone? cheers, Jess
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RandomThoughts

18 years 11 months ago

hahaha I laugh in your face

Ahhh weirdelf what a fire starter you are. Apparently you don't like me cuz I won't conform to your ways. Are you mad at the fact that I have the guts to write the way I want? Are you mad cuz I won't bow down to your foolish ways? Well I tell you this you pour the fuel on my fire. Giving me everything I need to keep writing. Just for you ima make my paragraphs longer. I think I might even write one bout you and how you annoy me. :) You can't break someone that is unbreakable you just make me stronger. So on with your insults cuz im loving every one.
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barbsdad2003

18 years 11 months ago

Just Five Thoughts:

1) It's apparent you care for your readers. 2) Congratulations on standing your ground. 3) And good ground it is. 4) Write about anything and everything in what you write. 5) I find this particular piece of yours a delight. Thanx, Chuck
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RandomThoughts

18 years 11 months ago

Thanks

Thank you chuck. Thank you for understanding me. Thank you for reading. I do care for my readers but only ones like you that appreciate my work.
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RandomThoughts

18 years 10 months ago

hahaha

I know I need an eye patch. Emo Pirate!

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