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Me and Mr. Paragraph
Dear, Mr. Paragraph
How are you today Mr. Paragraph? I’m doing fine if you might ask. Today I got another comment on our writings. Why do they hate the love we have for each other? Can they not understand the love between us? They can’t understand you unless I change you. Wanting me to replace you with Stanzas. Why? I don’t know. You and I Mr. Paragraph belong together. We fit together like a thousand piece puzzle. I don’t need Stanza I need you. Forever in my mind. They can’t accept you and me. Why read then? I tell them everyday I won’t change you. Seems that they can’t hear me. Should I scream louder? Should I wear a sign? What do I do to make them understand? Why comment on you if they can’t understand us? Mr. Paragraph I love and respect you. Emotion says hi. She said she will see you soon. When I get off work maybe we can get together and have a sit down. One day maybe they will give us a chance. One day they will understand us. Until then I will keep writing you.
You’re Love,
Jennifer
Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
I would simpy ask
RandomThoughts
18 years 11 months ago
Dont ask then
weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
if you don't post
RandomThoughts
18 years 11 months ago
hahaha I laugh in your face
barbsdad2003
18 years 11 months ago
Just Five Thoughts:
RandomThoughts
18 years 11 months ago
Thanks
Conect11
18 years 11 months ago
oh Jenny!
RandomThoughts
18 years 10 months ago
hahaha
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