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Jul 26, 2007
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mirror slipper
there’s something about last night i can’t remember
it’s something to do with a mirror, a slipper and going up the stairs
i logged the lines poorly
i gave you the only heart shaped flavour in the box
you thought it was a sign
i found the wrapper in the drain
wondered should i flush it, drown it or chuck it
— el_rochy, Jul 26, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
haunting, evocative and poignant
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