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Cat-Like

When I was young I had cat-like moves,

was relentless, and had no fears;

now, all that identifies me with a cat,

is the hair growing out of my ears!

I’m old, and gray, and I’ve lost my strut,

I’m not quite what I used to be;

though I’ve mellowed with age, and my eyes have dimmed,

that isn’t what’s troubling me.

Now, I’m quite aware of my surroundings,

I know what side my bread’s buttered on;

I just can’t remember the total

of lives lost, before nine are gone!

I’ll tell you what finally consoles me,

even cursed with these patches of fur;

I know when I’m blessed by my Master,

and I still have my ability to purr!

— docmaverick, Jul 26, 2007

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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orgami

18 years 10 months ago

lives and whiskers

Your poem brought me forth such rich memories of cats young and old and rhetorical "cats" old cats fat cats lean cats young cats well versed and well written "the total of lives lost, before nine are gone....." well done !
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

yeah, this is tres cool

of course I am not objective because I love cats and am also "cursed with these patches of fur" but poetry has little room for objectivity. Dug this and totally related cheers, Jess
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 2 months ago

This was so good that I read

This was so good that I read it to my four cats. Lucy, my calico, looked at me and winked! I swear it's true, LOL! Good job on this one. Always, Cat