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Jul 26, 2007
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Cat-Like
When I was young I had cat-like moves,
was relentless, and had no fears;
now, all that identifies me with a cat,
is the hair growing out of my ears!
I’m old, and gray, and I’ve lost my strut,
I’m not quite what I used to be;
though I’ve mellowed with age, and my eyes have dimmed,
that isn’t what’s troubling me.
Now, I’m quite aware of my surroundings,
I know what side my bread’s buttered on;
I just can’t remember the total
of lives lost, before nine are gone!
I’ll tell you what finally consoles me,
even cursed with these patches of fur;
I know when I’m blessed by my Master,
and I still have my ability to purr!
— docmaverick, Jul 26, 2007
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orgami
18 years 10 months ago
lives and whiskers
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
yeah, this is tres cool
Candlewitch
18 years 2 months ago
This was so good that I read