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Succulent

such succulent flesh
well flavoured
by the days sweat

invites me to explore
and lose myself
in the beauty and wealth
which emanate
from the core of your being

soon I’ll be clothed
in the bliss
ordained upon me
the richness
of your sex

waves of orgasm
crash their
erotic pain upon
my willing skin
I am a wanting
victim
in search of endless
flesh and pleasure

(C)2007.26.7. Lenny Gazbowski

— Lenny of Cohen, Jul 26, 2007

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purplemoondoll

18 years 10 months ago

What can i say?

Ditto Jess! Great writing!
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poet_inside

18 years 10 months ago

I liked it simple and sexy!

I liked it simple and sexy! I don't know about the last few lines, would have liked to see you spice it up just a bit more there.