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KISS ME

                                                          KISS ME

Kiss me dear to forget all my worries  and

to overcome all my griefs of life

when you are nearing me to kiss,I feel

a  tremendous feel blossoms in my mind

My eyeballs go to the sweet dark and

my lips get dried to quench the wine from…

Seconds moves slow as an year

The surrounding becomes dark and glare

Your face and lips only visible to me

I am flying,flying above on the heaven

Dear! please be there ,I will stay there for a long

SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN      AN INDIAN ENGLISH POET

— SAKTHEEE2007, Jul 25, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

I think you derive power

from using english when it is clearly your second language. This is so beautiful, ingenuous and lovely. I will never comment on your grammar, I even suspect you may use it that way on purpose. Even the last line, last word missing or leaving it forever? Cool with respect, Jess
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SAKTHEEE2007

18 years 10 months ago

THANKS

GIVE ME YOUR POSSITTIVE IDEAS TO COME UP AS WELL KNOWN POET THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS