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courthouse groupies
great its cigarette breaks and recess
out into the biting cold
the fresh clean flakes of snow descending
chains on my wrists
chains on my ankles are gone
out of that cramped backseat of the cruiser
just standing around killing time
shes standing next to me dressed to the nines
black stockings mini skirt chic sweater
white snow piling atop her fluffed and hairsprayed
hair
mascara rounding out the appeal
i ache and im not even in jail
just this judges hearing on my case
shes short too and cute
and i dont even smoke
snowing white and steady
on this picturesque day
dont give a damn if i go in for
thirty days or not
not up to me
but i have never forgotten that
jail groupie
a glimpse of life from the
other side
rubbing elbows of a different
nature
oh yes i got off
years probabtion and freedom
i hitchiked home in a snowstorm
dreaming of her
Annie
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
You are a great word painter orgami
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18 years 11 months ago
Great Storytelling
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18 years 11 months ago
You
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18 years 11 months ago
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